Wednesday 11 September 2024

Given Poems 2024 – Winning Poems

Ngā mihi ki a koutou for writing your poems for this edition of Given Words. We received 250 poems and have chosen 54 to publish here on Given Words. The winning poems have been selected by Sophia Wilson, Pat White and Charles Olsen. (You can read about us here.)

Charles Olsen comments on the poems on behalf of the judges: Sometimes the five words are so naturally absorbed into a poem that I have to read it a few times before I find them all. This didn’t happen with the mouthful ‘phantasmagoria’, although lines like ‘phantasmagoria fast-forwarded’, ‘a fantasy a fever dream / phantasmagoria’, ‘the phantasmagoria of man turned sepia’ and ‘the flavour of this curated phantasmagoria’, using alliteration, and the play of sounds, came closest. It was lovely to hear from one teacher who invited younger students to come up with their own meanings before they looked up the word in the dictionary. They said: the name of a cocktail, an ancient dance, a spell, a type of bird, among many more. Who’s to say these aren’t all true in the phantasmagoria of meaning?

As I write up my impressions on each poem I look forward to comparing notes later with the other two judges and I’m grateful to Sophia Wilson and Pat White for their thoughtful insights. As always, I recommend you first go on your own journey through our selection of poems and then come back here afterwards to compare impressions… although we try not to give too much away!

There was a wonderful sense of mystery in The Rocket, evoking a future without humans. Sophia highlights its ‘innovative weaving of dreamlike imagery’, where ‘sinister hints of apocalypse and environmental collapse contrast with the resilience of the natural world.’ I ask myself if it is the rocket that is thinking, feeling, that delineates, calibrates, ponders, or perhaps it could be the exploring tendrils. Sophia also highlights the ‘nostalgia and surprise conjured by the ending’.

Putting the reader into the mind of another was also a feature of How bees see us. Pat points to the ‘careful language and restraint’ as the poem focusses on ‘the otherworldliness of the remarkable insects that pollinate our lives in more ways than one.’ Sophia is struck by ‘the progression of images: “these children of the sun / their bodies of fire and ash / on diaphanous wings” are juxtaposed with we (humans) as “barrier[s] of fog and fume”, “marauding blobs of light” and “bull’s-eye blotches” between them and their “darling blooms”.'

I particularly enjoy how the five words are used in such a natural understated way in Wishbones. Although about birds, the word feather is used in an idiom, and ‘A phantasmagoria of wishbones’ to which ‘a lonely song calls’, is a wonderful way to evoke the ancestors of the birds. The poem’s treatment of the different parties with similar language: ‘Thriving locals’ and ‘New neighbours’ invites us to reflect on our individual impact.

Of What were we? Pat comments ‘they have nailed the five words seamlessly’ and the ‘poet knows about using words to surprise’. He highlights the ‘sound and rhythm’ which would be great recited in a spoken word or slam performance, and ‘the sudden twist at the end works a treat’.

We could continue discussing details in all the poems—the charming humble garden of Home Horticulture, the playful humour of a conversation between Watson and Holmes in gothic, the subtle images in Laundry where, as Pat says ‘the humdrum is blown wide-open to confront loneliness’, or having been a rower myself as a teenager, I loved the images in The Release, that have an otherworldliness, the subtlety of the water’s voice…

In the end it was the poet’s voice in Nana that stood out for us. As Sophia says, the opening lines beautifully capture the attention: ‘Nana I come to these mountains / to make noises like the Kunekune / or to build a shrine of deliverance’. Pat comments how it ‘seduces by the intimacy of the conversation’ and describes it as ‘an impressive piece of work using a form and language that need careful attention for it not to become sentimental or unstructured’. As with the poem What were we?, when read aloud, the spaces, pauses, and musicality of the poem, really come alive.

We received a record 148 poems in the Under-16s category this year! It is not always easy to compare poems by younger writers and those closer to 16, however Pat comments that ‘very young poets are just as capable of writing a telling image as those who are older and possess a more extensive vocabulary.’ We hope you’ve enjoyed the challenge and encourage you all to keep exploring the possibilities of language and poetry.

We particularly liked the imagination in Liminal Archive, with its ‘halls of phantasmagoria’ where memories are recorded; archives ‘you can hear’. Sophia says it is ‘a thoughtful poem that “whispers of things, / lost to the wild ocean of time”.’ The doubling up of adjectives in the fourth stanza suggests the complexity of describing each individual experience: ‘biting sting’ and ‘barking shouts’. Pat commented that ‘the poet takes us into a labyrinth of what ifs…’, and is led to ask, ‘what if the neat packages in which we place our history and our hopes for the future are mirages?

in a faraway land creates a poetic space for imagination and playful alliteration where time clasps at feathers. Curiously it is also one of the few poems to use the past tense of the word eat.

In a similar vein, the poem Phantasmagoria creates a fantasy world with its dreamlike vision of ‘smoke whispering to the trees’ Much like the acrostic poems inspired by the meaning of the word phantasmagoria, this doesn’t try to explain what it is but rather uses the word as a springboard to create the fantasy space.

Pat describes The bush as ‘a conservative verse, except the twist at the end throws the contents wide open. Without saying so the poet asks, what is happening to our world?’ I found it playful and expressive and was left wondering what is going on ‘Unseen, / Outside of time’.

Among poems by younger poets we particularly enjoyed My Grandad is a Wizard, Pat describing it as ‘an imaginative delight’ where the contents ‘at no stage over-reach their task’. Each of the five words is treated in an original way, adding something creative to the story and playing with the idea of phantasmagoria.

In the end we were drawn to the originality and creativity of the poem Gallery Exhibition No. 73.16. with its three rooms (echoing perhaps the different rooms in the video-presentation of the word made by Malcolm Doidge). Sophia describes it as ‘a rich and evocative poetic dream sequence with surprising images and shifts.’ In Pat’s words the poem ‘takes on a form and expands our appreciation of the gallery contents by the way the poet views the exhibition,’ and he notes, it ‘doesn’t tell us what to think about what is going on.’ We are inside a dream space where meaning fades in and out of focus. Sophia comments how ‘the last stanza poignantly conveys climate urgency: “only time can tell us / the duration it will take / for dreamless dust to prevail”.



After all our reading and deliberations over 10 days or so, we come to the moment where I look up the names of the poets. There are always lots of surprises. We are delighted to announce the winning poets. The winner of Best Poem is Jason Lingard for his poem Nana and the winner of Best Poem by Under-16s is Miranda Yuan for her poem Gallery Exhibition No. 73.16. This edition we would also like to award a Special Mention to Bhaarati Sharma for her poem My Grandad is a Wizard. The winners receive books courtesy of The Cuba Press and Massey University Press. Congratulations to all on behalf of Given Words, The Cuba Press and Massey University Press.

Below are the winning poems and Special Mention. We also invite you to read our selection of the rest of the poems from adults here and from under-16s here. All entries had to include the following five words: feather, whisper, time, eat, and phantasmagoria.






Nana

Nana sometimes I come to these mountains
to make noises like the Kunekune
or to build a shrine of deliverance—
                                                      I sit and eat with alpine spirits
                                                      and tell the manu
                                                      things I can’t think about.

At night the rangiora leaves are like little moons
                                                      lighting the way    whispering
                                                      Do you still feel me in your bones?
                               I do
                                      and yes    the adult me still grabs
                                      the leaves of the rimu trees
                                      to feel if they are masculine    or feminine
                                      because as a child    you told me    females are softer
                                      and that made sense    at the time
but in the future    it will not.
So    I lie down on the forest floor
and play dead                letting the huhu and wētā caress me
                                      under a phantasmagoria of stars
                          the ground is feminine—
                          Papatūānuku holding me    because    you’re gone.

So I’m hiding    semi-obscured
                          slivers of flesh poking through ponga ferns
                          stuffing feathers in my ears
—but still    I hear you whisper your favourite song:
                                       It’s so funny, how we don’t talk anymore.

Your words fading    I wave to your wairua    walking backwards
                          softly    on rocks of green teenage flesh
                          mimicking every move the wind makes—
                          in a silken effort
                                                         to disappear.


Jason Lingard
Te Whanganui-a-Tara Wellington





Gallery Exhibition No. 73.16

phantasmagoria:
a sequence of dreams

one: the feather room
how many plucked birds
does one need
to fill a space with feathers aflight?
still, does any of that matter?
when face to face with jade and pearl
suspended on almost invisible
strings of gossamer.
colours harsh, soft to touch,
downy, never down,
never touching the ground.
but don’t you ever forget
the chords are still there.

two: the lunch room
neon lights fizzle from on to off
off to on—
cues to the silent dancers.
splitting smiles on, inhibitions off.
bring in the whispers of sweet nothings
plated with sweet everythings.
it’s time to eat
gloss and glitter.
the roast pig at the centre
speaks of the heat in the oven.
he is met with disregard,
my condolences.

three: the sand room
after passing an oasis,
the desert always feels drier—
endless expanses
drenched in gold
worth less than a single cent.
only time can tell us
the duration it will take
for dreamless dust to prevail,
the number of epiphanies it will take
to come to terms with the
permanent haze.

phantasmagoria:
to begin and to end



Miranda Yuan, aged 14
Ōtautahi Christchurch





My Grandad is a Wizard

Grandad lives in a mushroom.
He has a phantasmagoria
of spider jars with dreams and candy
that makes you sick,
a charm that whispers,
a book of secrets made from feathers…
and the scariest of them all
is a haunted doll that eats unicorn horns.

He has a brush that can take you anywhere
any time,
a pirate’s ring filled with mermaid’s hair,
and dragon teeth.

I love my Grandad
and his phantasmagoria!


Bhaarati Sharma, aged 9
Ōtautahi Christchurch




About the Poets


Jason Lingard is a writer and designer from Pōneke Wellington. He is currently completing the Poetry Work at the Institute for Modern Letters. He is also working on a collection of poetry, and a non-fiction book about fashion and pop music. He has recently had work published with Circular, Void, Rat World, Tarot Journal, and Bad Apple.


Miranda Yuan goes to Burnside High School in Ōtautahi Christchurch and is an aspiring writer who likes experimenting with poetry and prose. She has attended Write On School for Young Writers since she was 11 because she can share her work with like-minded people and get constructive feedback. She is also a competitive rower and a choir kid.


Bhaarati Sharma is 9 years old and lives in Ōtautahi Christchurch with her family and her cat, Trixie. Bhaarati’s poem was inspired by her love of the Harry Potter books and movies. Sadly, she never got to meet her grandads as they lived in Fiji. Doodling and drawing flowers and butterflies is one of Bhaarati’s favourite things to do. She enjoys being with friends, learning about other cultures and meeting new people. Bhaarati can speak Hindi and a little bit of French. In the future, Bhaarati will be a cook or an artist or maybe both.




Continue reading our selection of poems from adults here and from under-16s here.


Given Poems – National Poetry Day 2024 – Adults

Here is our selection of the entries for Best Poem for the Given Words competition for National Poetry Day. They all had to include the following five words: feather, whisper, time, eat, and phantasmagoria.


You can read the winning poem Nana by Jason Lingard along with the judge's comments here and the poems from the Under-16s category here.






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what were we?

call it a supercut
a speedrun a zoetrope
a fantasy a fever dream
phantasmagoria
call it a checkbox
a courtesy a formality
a milestone a watershed
a feather in your cap
a seminar an epitaph
something for the résumé
a slideshow a side quest
call it nothing
a way to pass the time
shrug and shrug and shrug
feign nonchalance
nothing to write home about
call it heresy
a whopper a whisper
flick on the gaslight
make a big show of it
go all melpomene and thalia
spitefully expressive
call it a big time blunder
a misread a mistake
reframe every memory
in dreary sullen sepia
make me eat my words
get intimate with hindsight
and regret regret regret
but please
don’t ever call it a
situationship

Ben O’Connell
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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The Rocket

The rocket sits an age on its pad
time measured by ivy sprawl
and the whisper of atomic decay
birdsong reclaims the morning
from the day of too much light
when the phantasmagoria of man turned sepia
a glacial drip of mineral rain
eats tiny holes in the vanes
while the rocket awakens to thought
budding tendrils in search of shape
thinking perhaps it is a feather
and not attached to the earth at all
until it feels clamps
dials and switches
gaskets and ceramics
reaching along roots
it delineates a footprint
discerning direction and altitude
calibrating poles and magnetism
azimuth and perihelion
solar drift
it ponders a while over lost voices
all that has been stolen
it imagines skimming pebbles
across an empty sea
each a grooved white stone
of undeciphered whorls
till a last throw skips across the water
one, two, three, four....
and it launches

Stuart Airey
Hamilton


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How bees see us
(after watching a video on Youtube)

a swarm of clouded bubbles
a vacillating sequence
of whispers
hum of the dead
unintelligible syllables
a phantasmagoria—we are not
as consequential or substantial
as we think

we are just—
a barrier of fog and fume between
them and the nectar they want
to eat, suck and lap
with multifunctional hairy tongues,
and the pollen they tuck into pockets
ferry on leg feathers
as they save the world
with each flower fertilised

they labour without introspection,
this honey-making, bee-breeding machine,
these children of the sun
their bodies of fire and ash on
diaphanous wings
while we are marauding blobs of light
shifting through time
a mosaic without the red
sunblock yellowed—we block their sun
bull's-eye blotches between them
and their darling blooms
they do not sting us lightly

when no bees remain to see us
we will have only four more years.

Heather McQuillan
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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gothic

‘for goodness sake
she's turned your head,
and where, dear Holmes,
is your salutary logic now?
This time she's done it!’,
and Holmes without the slightest turn
of head from evening window
answered, ‘You may be right,
dear Watson, but there's
something ineffable here,
like a whisper on the moors
at night, perhaps you didn't
hear, a feather falling
from the moon, yes, of course
a goose overhead flying
against cloud, but it's the
subtle fall of it, out of such
distance into our thoughts,
am I to refuse a woman with
blood in the corner of her eyes, and
lips curled like the curving of
a sword along its edge to the
pressing point? Watson, her
face eats at me…’ and he turned
to find the Chinese lantern Watson
lit was turning on candle heat
its shadow phantasmagoria,
the crooked postman &
cock-eyed policeman
chasing the bantam
behind a cart with
the butcher drunken
at the reigns, revolving
swifter as the candle
flared, and Watson
chuckled to himself loud
enough for Holmes to hear,
‘Turned your head like
a Chinese lantern, with nothing
more than a five word spell,
the road to hell paved indeed
with such intentions…’


Peter Le Baige
Tāmaki Makaurau Auckland


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Wishbones

These islands heaved
with pulsing birdsong.
Thriving locals warbled up the dawn
trilling lofty names, calling
in the canopy, the undergrowth, the wet.

New neighbours landed
to call, to plant, to thrive, to name
to hunt, to eat, to feather
their caps. Brought comforts
that injured, blunders that laid waste.

These days, there is
lonely song, a whisper of
that former roaring swell
calling to a phantasmagoria
of wishbones.

Will our little fingers snap
to action, carve out green
corridors where singers perch, sip, feast?
Or will we name it a daydream
an idea in quill calligraphy?

Our call. If we clutch
earnest, honest work with
keenest hands, in time
the last word may yet be
a plumed, throaty chorus.

Lee Fraser
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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Laundry

Spin-cycled, then tumble-dried,
feverishly rising and falling.

A phantasmagoria of negatives,
colours washed from every frame.

Even my tears pack their bags,
these desiccating nights.

Numbers drip from the clock,
I eat time like icing:

sticky-fingered,
starved for attention,

ultimately unsatisfied
(I wanted the cake too).

Marooned between pummelled pillows
and inhospitable regrets;

wake whispering to my sheets
through a mouthful of feathers.

Strip the bed, but lose the impetus
to take the task any further.

I can’t think of anything lonelier
than my wet laundry, lying,

in a basket that once held his too.

Bee Trudgeon
Cannons Creek, Porirua


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Speak to me no more of war

If you should ask me of war
I’ll put on my hat, my coat
and walk down to the park.
I no longer belong to the unnatural world.

On the bridge over the eternal stream
watching the cattail knock and whisper.
The geese spread their wings and rise.
I pluck a feather from the flowing water

pin it into my hat. There are many wars
that have pulled us into fragile peace.
Time is a moving memory cog of conflict.
The news a phantasmagoria of blood collage.

I leave the park, enter a busy street.
A café with a sign in red lettering
leers ALL YOU CAN EAT $20.
As if we can devour all our fear.

Lincoln Jaques
Tāmaki Makaurau Auckland


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Liar, Liar

you tell me ghosts whisper to you
you pretend you’re haunted
but I see your clear eyes
and I know soon the real kēhua
will come to eat your lies
and leave you gasping for light.
they are like feathers, drifting
on the cold air that sidles
through half-ajar doors and cracked
windows, but when they sink
their teeth into your pretty soul
you’ll be sorry.
take a moment, take your words back
before they etch in stone
immutable like a prophecy
waiting for time to play out,
for the future to come roaring in
a phantasmagoria of blood
surging over us like a wave but
only you will be screaming.

Sherryl Clark
Whangārei


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Home horticulture

Couch, dock, groundsel, mallow. The whole
weedy phantasmagoria, with daffodils
too sparsely planted out to make a show.
Feathers, fur, a desiccated carapace. The

hollows that the dog gouged in the lawn.
Clumps of dacron easily survive the winter,
while the toy rots, face down, seam open to
the weather. The apricot tree buds pink,

a promise we will eat in time. Then, behind
it all, the blue grape hyacinths, still hardy
and still here. I prised apart the woody
corms to plant them, the motherlode heavy

in the hands like concrete. The one who
put them in the ground before had poured a
path, raised a washing line not far from
here. Wise head, kind hands for newlyweds.

He was so competent, and loved them so.
Couch, dock, groundsel, mallow. I whisper to
the hyacinths, hello.

Megan Clayton
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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Landscape with the Fall of Icarus

A collection of found feathers and crushed coffee cups
  Used pens
    Broken headphones and 1B5 exercise books filled with pencil scrawl
      The detritus of a life spread on a bedroom floor
        Air thick with the phantasmagoria of the girl who could’ve been
          Like numbers left in the memory of an old Casio calculator
            Not adding up to anything
              Packets of two minute noodles never to be eaten
                Origami cranes that can’t fly
                  In time, there will only be three cardboard boxes left, neatly labelled,

But now, out in the harbour unnoticed, aftermath washes over twisted wax wings
All that is heard is the whisper of wind on the ocean.

Emma Philips
Tāmaki Makaurau Auckland


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The Release

I eat
Whispers
Of you
In the dark
A watery phantasmagoria
The timing of a stroke

You
Are a dictionary of feathers
Turning oars horizontal
Towards
the next pull

At first blush
My ribs stretch
To trace the dew
Of a single scull

Rachel Gomez
Carterton


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The Farm

My tūrangawaewae,
a phantasmagoria of broken dreams.
Let’s eat again,
Roast mutton. Spuds.
Pudding too, of course.

Time has ticked off,
the for-sale signs have gone up.
Family have fractured.
Water is thicker than blood, apparently.
The for-sale signs come down again.

My tūrangawaewae,
Let’s eat again,
Lamb chops, spuds and peas, this time.

I hear the whispers.
The small-town gossip,
The feathers hitting the ground with a boom.
Let’s eat again,
Lamb shanks, carrots and mash.

Who wants you now?
My tūrangawaewae,
My phantasmagoria of broken dreams.

Put it into pines they say,
Subdivide it.
Slice it up and hack at it like Te Ika-a-Maui.
Those brothers didn’t like each other either.

How did it come to this?
My tūrangawaewae.
My phantasmagoria of broken dreams.
Let’s eat again.
Roast pork this time, she’s lost her sheep.

I see grandad looking down.
Where’s that fat wool cheque now?
Who’s going to carve that Sunday roast?
Sharpen the knife and pass the gravy.

Nicola Douglass
Napier


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The dog

I used to write poems to get me out of my own head // To get away from a bed I couldn’t physically pull myself out of // Anything // Away from that pakaru town before it closed in like bad lungs, before its tarry skin seduced me into submission // I would write to make the days fold in on themselves; writing poems and sleeping were the same in that sense.

Now, though, I've come to find I've long since plucked all the feathers from my dreams // They sit in front of me bald // They whisper to me, begging for me to eat them again.

I used to feel everything // I would cry in technicolour // Emotions would flood through me like phantasmagoria fast-forwarded // Life was some wicked version of eternal sunshine in stop-motion, looped.

Now, I have no appetite // I barely write // Time moves as if it’s suspended - lost in space // It's that lukewarm feeling in your gut when you realise everything is really nothing // This is growing up I guess // That’s what they all said // Is this growing up? // This means I'm happy, right? // Or am I just tired? // I'm happy, I think?

The dog needs a walk.

Gabriel Field
Arakamu, South Taranaki


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Apparition on Bamboozle Avenue

Flash of light in a shop window
Shadow on a far wall.

Kokopelli feather head
Now adorned in horn
Dreadlocked behind protruding leafless vines.

Whisper and it/he/she/they/we/you (poof)
Become smoke and mirrors
Marco the Magnificent.

Saturday night break-dancer
Salsa, rumba, samba
Swing my phantasmagoria auditor of time
Eavesdropper of the deaf.

Old misdemeanor-maker
Consultant to NASA . . .
Not sure if what you need is a capsule full of lithium
Lithium batteries,
Or esteemed awe at unprecedented levels of joy.

Rain priest swindler
Prance through turquoise waters of my desert tidal zone
While biofluorescent anemones
Eat lunch with sister Gaia.

Elizabeth Farris
Waikanae


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Dynamo Man

hears time conducted in whispers through
cardboard boxes he power-lifts onto trucks,
the clink of piano keys shifting on the way to
someone’s retirement or marriage home, he drives

under the lightbulbs of other people’s houses,
the blur of this transformer inducting lives
magnetically, a phantasmagoria of strain
in his triceps, or in the night hours of home

the forty-wink flash when you see the bones
of the old man to come, he eats
all the daylight hours like feathers, every wiry muscle
taut in an incapacitated, unregulated tick tick
economy set on wearing him out.

Gail Ingram
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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If I could go into the garden

I would lay a blanket on the grass.
Go slow I know it’s not an easy thing to do
to let the vast phantasmagoria
of daily dread dissolve

but if I could
I might draw my finger in the sky
around the feather ferns where I lie
breathing low to the earth. Be still.

I’d draw around the praying mantis swaying
on the pinking leaf or I might carefully trace
the tiny flowers that scatter underneath.
Then looking up I’d count the greens.

Take your time. ‘You need to get your eye in’
my father would have said.
And then you start to see—the wild,
the soft, the grey, the dangerous stuff of serpents

breathing in the grieving dark of looming trees
breathing out the bright lime leaves below.
Close your eyes.
Don’t eat, don’t talk, just listen. Count the birds.

I’d hear the teenage tui practising
two gardens down the hill the rattle of the punga
at the back a far off mower not too loud.
The whisper of an invisible bee.

I’d smell the empty empty air.
If I could go into the garden.

Maggie McGregor
Sandringham, Tāmaki Makaurau Auckland


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The air tastes

of forgotten things / phantasmagoria blooms / & in the corner colours grow / in reverse wide-mouthed / what is this place we have entered? / a theatre full / of feathers forsaken / speaking in a language only they understand / they are voracious / they eat the stillness / the emptiness that moves through the air / you think it is out / of character somehow / the day falls into night / the ordinary becomes the strange / an endless loop but time cracks / in a space where the world isn’t / quite real / the theatre coughs
a caged snake / whispers

it’s /            

illusory               


Kim Martins,
Kerikeri


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Time elongates the space between you and me

That evening we first met
you whispered into my ear
'Don't worry. You look better in it.'

Your birthday.
You made me eat chips
dipped in caramel sundae
from the McDonalds drive through.

Wild black sand beach.
And you on one knee
and a seagull feather
between your fingers.

Was I to know then
you were handing me
Icarus's discarded wing?

Time
elongates
the space between

me and you

you and I:

when we were 'us.'

I make my home amidst
these spectral visitations
in this hallway phantasmagoria
wishing for a resurrection.

Vanilla Black
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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Closing Time

thirty past midnight, and it’s a halfway sort
of leaving
drawn out, now stalling at the table’s edge
defying time—to force this place to shed me
like a feather
to see this round out
to its end

and there will be a wake
(I have to say it)
there’ll be a wake
(for all these late nights on the town)
a stubborn swirling
in the dregs—phantasmagoria—
last whisper of a spirit
still seeking to be downed

but age has emptied me
of that old hunger
lost chances have collapsed
into the lines around my eyes
restless, those years have left me
with the lesson:
how to eat a stranger’s passing glance
and be full.

Shaun Stockley
Waiouru


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alternative truth

Naïve whispers of dawn,
Green and warm,
Kiss the dew-drip playgrounds,
in my gilded memories.

Yellowed hours unfurl,
Viridescent moments, a feast.
I savor and eat,
Long remembered
sugar-dusted days.

Nostalgic half-digested truths,
Boast-plump tales,
Softened and kneaded,
rise in retelling.
Keep the kind
And sweet, and palatable.

And, bury the rest.

A pirate's black bounty.
Stained, and hard,
Gleaming, and guilty.

Ignorance is, this...
And that, too.
Baking and eating,
My own cannibal cake.

And, Time’s feather pen,
My hand in his,
Miswrites and misremembers,
Villainous reds as warm golds.
And misspells, salty blues
as soft greens.

And, the flavour of this
Curated phantasmagoria,
Lingers, sweet and sour.
This bittersweet,
Half-remembered edge,
Of the taste of me.

James Riley
Wairarapa


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Time came for you. It took and took.
First it snatched your hair
                   so black it was famous round here.

Then, remember?
You could not eat.
That lumbering hunger of yours, that dumb giant that smashed through
buildings of salt n’ vinegar chip sandwiches.
It took that shiny thing that made you want,
                                      back to its nest. 

Before you left, I had this dream.
Phantasmagoria even.
Yeah I know—
if you’d heard me say a word like that you’d of given me a dead leg.

But,
In the dream you were holding a black feather as long as your forearm.
You raised it up high. I knew then—time would take its prize.

Your Mum said I could say goodbye, but only if I wanted? She wasn’t really asking.
The hallway to your room felt like I’d breached a crypt. You were the cold jewel inside. Your ginormous hands so neat by your sides.

A laugh leaked out of me—being in your room again with your kid curtains still up. But then I was howling—just a dog outside the Pak n’ Save.

I sat down on your bed, one last time, heard myself whisper,

my mate

Claris Harvey
Tāmaki Makaurau Auckland


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                                             technē

                                phantasmagoria
                            holograms
                        whisper sweet
                    nothings and

            eat into time
        expanding
    cavities of
the cloud

feather fibre
    optics
        bristle
            desire for

                    more and
                        m o r e  and
                            m  o  r  e  and
                                m   o   r   e
               
                                                bytes

Cindy Zeiher
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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stereotypy

many feathers fall fast off one thousand pigeons
landing on our institution’s red rusted roof.
you patients, inside these yellow walls,
think their scrabbling sounds like the whisper of a rainstorm
if the rain were pebbles.
you are not soothed.

our dear, eccentric occupational therapist
stoops under wing-hail,
taking her time collecting each grey feather.
she will use them later; her hands regularly
transmogrify detritus.

the woman who drives that beat-up silver peoplemover
has been identified by staff
as thrower of daily seed handfuls
to the scrum, or even
whole slices of bread;
creating chaotic feasts.

you all discover
that pigeons eat
with apocalyptic fervor.

you ask us:
—so in the end will it be birds?
—congregating, overtaking?
—what will sustain them with no thrown seed?
—no bloated white slices disintegrating between grass blades?
—if there are corpses left behind?
—what then?

these are not tolerated questions. do not
imagine the apocalypse. do not
picture a corpse. do not
allow phantasmagoria
to pervade your fractured minds.
be still now.
stop wondering.

keep your heads down;
we know you can hear them,
but under no circumstances are you to look.
we said: do not look up
at those flocking pigeons.

Hebe Kearney
Tāmaki Makaurau Auckland


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dəˈmen(t)SH(ē)ə (Dementia)

Thoughts like feathers are sometimes too heavy to carry,
In the moult of the mind.
Or just too thinned and stretched,
Tangled like dusted webs.
Set afloat on a confused sea.

A phantasmagoria where,
Time is the sun rising downwards,
Earth spinning backwards.
The incoming tide ebbing,
Outgoing tide flowing.

Life eats at you,
And you remember the extinguishing of sunsets,
But not the horizons,
You remember the Milky Way,
But not that it is filled with stars.
You remember the silver lining of clouds,
But not the storm that passed.
You remember your salt encrusted skin,
But not the wrath of the waves.
You remember the whisper of leaves,
But not that it is autumn.

Thoughts perishing,
From the decay in your mind.

Thoughts slip out like flying fish,
Alone and adrift.

In the moult of the mind,
You drop your multi-coloured feathers
And take flight to a broken horizon.

Tamsin Worsley
Tāmaki Makaurau Auckland


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Writing on a wall

There should’ve been more—
ripened harvests, river washed, are golden ready,
hardened bricks piled.
There’s still conflict, lands to conquer, deals to make.
Why didn’t you wait? For feasts and dancing? For triumphs.
The world, my king, my son was yours.

But now,
three coffins, a stone sarcophagus,
my anguished whispers.
I’ve brought your board games, flint knives, your own stillborn children,
An ivory bracelet, some papyrus.
Freshly washed, your skin is perfume slick.
Next to you, a basket of dates you’ll never eat,
One linen glove, part of a pair, broken as a heart,
Like yours. Like mine.

All’s a phantasmagoria:
the past, the future,
harvests gathered, challenges met,
you still king.
At my breast, you were milk-drunk, plump legs Nile paddling,
a golden rattle, those cack-handed hieroglyphs,
you never got right,
teaching your brother about pubic hair, lice, women,
the art of a royal swagger, calling,
'Hey, Mum. I love you.'
All power and energy,
you slammed doors, battled teachers.

But come my love, take my hand.
Let’s weigh your heart against a feather.
See the monkeys dancing on the wall, your blue glass goblets,
your carriage oiled, luxurious?
Everyone’s waiting.

It’s time: Step into another life.

Lynda Scott Araya
Otekaieke, Oamaru


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Continue reading the winning poems along with the judge's comments here or the poems from the Under-16s category here.

Given Poems – National Poetry Day 2024 – Under-16s

Here is our selection of the entries for Best Poem by Under-16s for the Given Words competition for National Poetry Day. They all had to include the following five words: feather, whisper, time, eat, and phanstasmagoria.


You can read the winning poem Gallery Exhibition No. 73.16 by Miranda Yuan and the poem My Grandad is a Wizard by Bhaarati Sharma which received a Special Mention, along with the judge's comments here and the poems from the Adult's category here.



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Liminal Archive

Mountains of files,
Walls stretching to the heavens,
the archive of memories,
for each person on this earth.

And if you stand quite still,
and wait for your song to cease,
you can hear them,
whispers of things,
lost to the wild ocean of time

The chatter from dinner, perhaps.
Silver ringing against deep mahogany,
sharing a hearth and heart while they eat.
Chatter and laughter muffled by a wall.
The snarling of a hound.
And sirens?

Or the biting sting of cold,
as two people huddle close.
Wailing cries of misery,
barking shouts of laughter,
the hum of empty silence.
All these things

Yet no one can access this place.
No hand, paw, scale, or feather.
These halls, neither in past or future,
and furthest from the present.
These halls of phantasmagoria
are to be kept hidden.

To the few that discover them.
who long for days where everything came easy,
you may walk through the endless shelves
looking through each cupboard and cabinet.

You won't find anyone.
Nobody is there any more.

Olivia Moreau, aged 14
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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Phantasmagoria

Phantasmagoria takes all
time with it
eating away
the life of
this world.
Like smoke whispering
to the trees
telling all the secrets
of the earth.
It gossips of magic
as soft as silk,
spun from
the tail feathers
of a phoenix
and dragon fur
stolen from deep
in the heart
of the universe.

Evie Parsonson, aged 11
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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she shuts her eyes / the world drops dead

within her skull a carnival of chaos unravels like a feather tapestry.
she dances on the edge of time.
a tightrope walker between sanity and insanity.
her laughter, a cruel symphony echoing though corridors of fractured mirrors.
in her eyes galaxies collide a nebula of anguish and constellations of delirium.
she weaves her own world.
a spider spinning silk from fractured thoughts.
she dreams of drowning in ink-black oceans where sirens singing lullabies of madness.
the walls whisper, lost in the howling wind.
she clings to fragments of nursery rhymes, their innocence twisted,
she sings of lambs and daises. now blasphemy eats her tongue
they say she’s just hurting but she knows the truth her mind is a fractured kaleidoscope.
in this asylum of broken mirrors, she pirouettes through phantasmagorias.
a moth drawn to the flame burning brighter.

Heidi Taylor Smith, aged 14
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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The bush

Unseen,
Outside of time,
All I see or hear or feel;
The fluttering feathers of birds,
The whisper of a breeze,
The damp and leaf speckled ground.
Eaten by the bush,
Tranquil in my solitude,
The forest moves around me,
But my own eyes betray me,
Their lids flicking open,
The birds, the bush, the breeze
A fleeting phantasmagoria of falsity.

Rhiannon Blackball, aged 13
Dunedin


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Book By Its Cover

Hear my language!
My articulation and pronunciation.
I know what 'Phantasmagoria' means,
and I can say the longest place name.
And I can speak my language.
Interject a conversation with ancient wisdom,
and show you just how sophisticated
'our kind' can be.

But all you see is my skin.
My brown, Māori skin,
with its history of not knowing,
and its well-documented stupidity.
Just ignore the clever ones.

Look at my grades!
See the sheet with its A-plusses.
My exam papers with their ticked words
and raving compliments.
My report card with its
'brilliant student's and 'exceptional work's.

But all you see is my skin.
My brown, Māori skin,
with its scars of thievery and wrongdoing, and
its screams of 'COPS!' and 'RUN!'
Its whispers of colonisation drowned out.

See my culture.
As delicate and as beautiful as a feather.
You people eat up our stories, trying to
save what you broke, stole and desecrated.
Hear the words of my ancestors,
providing precious knowledge.
Guiding me forward.

And with this,
I hope that this time,
you will see more
than just my skin.

But all you see is my skin.
My brown, Māori skin.
Still.

Kaitoro Walker, aged 15
Lower Hutt


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An Open Drawer

In an open drawer, a leatherbound book
Remainders of the past surround me
Memories of a different generation
Of ancient wonders, in golden lands
The weight of the heart against a feather
It spells the truth.
Epic poems reveal the siege of high walls
And then a perilous journey home
Legends of Emperors watch the sparring blades
Of gladiators in towering arenas
Cutlasses clash, tales of tall sails on high seas
And a headless body that swims around the boat
Vanquishing ports for exploration and growth
Defiant souls seek out the plunder of new lands
Flightless birds hunted to extinction
Whispers of a forgotten world.
An age of art and music, the greats of literature
A revolution in more ways than one, the call for freedom
Eats away at oppression and greed
Beyond fantasy and wildest horror
Staggering in trenches, slaughtered by bullets
The war of others falling from the sky
Causing destruction and displacement
Thinking that we can’t make a difference
Shifting ever closer to the tipping point
Stories transcend time to become new sketches
In the crinkled pages of this dusty book
Faded after images, flash in a sudden phantasmagoria.

Bill Kelly, aged 12
Te Whanganui-a-Tara Wellington


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Broken Shores

A feather on Tangaroa’s back,
Drifts through time to shore,
Trees whisper through their roots,
A phantasmagoria of what it is,
Man eats Tāne’s limbs
’Til sun reaches the ground.

Alfie Lash, aged 10
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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in a faraway land

Once–Upon–A–Time
found
a feather,
felt
its fragile fate
(forever
fraying at
the edges),
heard
the whispers
of the fallen fears -
(echo)
ate
from plates
of truths
forgotten
(drifting far
far away)

watch:
phantasmagorias
of life,
lost,
found,
a feather,
fading feather,
faded feather fragments flutter
drifting through the
clasp of
Time.

Ritika Joseph, aged 14
Brisbane / Ōtautahi Christchurch


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Phantasmagoria

Pink feather, flamingos
Happily eat their
Algae and seeds
Near the
Trees; howls and whispers start to
Appear in
Shadowy, cold
Mouldy places—
A creepy
Ghost from another time… WAIT.
Or is it
Really a ghost…
I… I…
Ahhhhhhhhhh!

Ella Kang, aged 8
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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When I was watching my tv
I was watching a scary movie
Then I closed my eyes but I can still see it flashing
—that is phantasmagoria.

Feathers dropping out of the sky
Thunder flashing while I eat
My friend called me and whispered to my ear
I stared at my phone

I looked at the time
It was way past my bed time
So I went to sleep
In my dream, I was in a haunted house
I saw ghosts go by in a phantasmagoria

It is time to go to school
I stopped as I was walking because
I saw a colourful feather
I picked it up
A bird whispered to me
So I gave it something to eat from my lunch box.

Leeann, aged 8
Invercargill


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Summer Haze

Summer haze
creeps behind the gaping hills,
projects an absence of light
Whispers dance on the water
like dragonflies, like a phantasmagoria
of time cascading like feathers
when the wind drops
eating away the cracked memories
of existence.

Macy Rochford, aged 11
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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Whisper

Whisper
of thoughts race
my mind-boxes flash
a phantasmagoria of hallucinations
projector quadrilaterals

feather, feather
eats through the chaos
of shifting lights

Stroke, embrace
time doesn’t matter here
my boxes open and close
mirrors echo
my struggling thoughts

Whisper
of organized files
scattering
scrambling till
time do us
a-part

Jessica Hurrell, aged 15
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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Acrostic poem about phantasmagoria

Powerful in meaning with every movement,
Horrors of the night brought back by smoke and lanterns,
A creepy film played with technology of old,
New time, new whisper, in the changing scenes,
Tones of scariness within every shadow,
Amplified fear is struck in all of the audience,
Silence seems loud in the theatre of darkness,
Malaise everywhere – thou cannot escape,
A moment of dread, as hope is eaten by negativity,
Guaranteed for there to be no hope, absolutely not.
Or, so we thought……
“Replay that! Replay that!” Unexpected cries rise from the audience.
Imagination, light as a feather, combined with terror, strong as a diamond,
All make true a glorious PHANTASMAGORIA!

Angel Yuan, aged 9
Porirua


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My Poem About Me

I used to eat snails
But now I don’t
I used to be scared of birds
But now I love them
I used to shout in class
But now I whisper
I used to not understand the word phantasmagoria
But now I do
I used to be late for school
But now I am on time
I used to hate feathers
But now I love them

Willow, aged 10
Invercargill


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The Swimming Pool

When I went to the swimming pool
I felt the water tickling me like a feather
it felt like a phantasmagoria of emotions
crawling up my brain

When I went to the swimming pool
I felt the joy on my head
but then it was time to eat
but then I heard a whisper
that I might go again

Aiden Wong, aged 8
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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Father

I am nestled in a feather armchair eating rice.
Behind me is a fireplace.
The smell of smoke
And the flames remind me
how war grows.
In today’s paper a country at war.
My son is fighting for our freedom.
I think of him shielding others.
Injured
Graves
Grief
Mud
Enemy
Above me the lights whisper
and I remember the storm
the night my son was born.
There were phantasmagoria in this room
that made me think
how war casts shadows over our lives.
I remember the time I closed the gate
and my son in his uniform hugged me and waved goodbye.
In my dreams he runs into battle.
'Don’t shoot him!'
Please return safely.

Claire Zhao, aged 10
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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The Death of Memory

The last whispers of life trickle out of her mouth like a phantasmagoria
purple-blue flickering feathers of mysterious energy.
Every memory, every thought.
An entanglement of her mangled lives engulfs the cave system
entwining in every living soul
filling every being with an eerie emptiness.
Eating at every life.
Yet the pendulums of time continue swinging.
The universe would go on.
A moment to be forgotten.

Will Hurren, aged 11
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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Turbulance

The sound of a plane
eating a vicious wind.
I’m a passenger travelling
over the Southern Alps.
My hands fluttery as feathers.
In the seat behind me
an old man
clenches his stomach.
I see the fear
in my little sister’s eyes.
This is no phantasmagoria.
All the time I wish to stand on soil.
Now the Southern Alps whispers
'You are free'

Raphe Dacre, aged 12
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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The clock ticks and I sit.
Mother sits across from me, the light casting a yellow glow over her.
I look at my plate, at the chipped china, blue feathers dancing around its rim.
'Eat', she whispers.
I let out a small sob. Won’t. Can’t.
Time passes, and with every minute I grow weak.
A fake smile on her face, a phantasmagoria of hope.
Eat.

Her grin grows wider, stretching over the folds of her skin.
Her teeth are white like shined pearls, they glimmer insistently.
I want to cry, to release these emotions but as I look at the plate,
They all go away.
I want to throw the plate at her perfect face, watch the facade melt away.
Watch her cry and watch her scream
Eat.

She’s left the room, given up on me.
'A lost cause!', she shrieks.
'Take her to the doctor!', she screams.
The doctor won’t know what to do with me.
Nobody does. Not even me.
Eventually, they will see.
Eat.

In the kitchen, the light is strangely comforting.
The only hope and comfort I have ever felt.
A small smile works its way on my face, not used to being there.
The food untouched, my belly empty.
Happy as I’ll ever be.
Full.

Ava Turner, aged 13
Titirangi, Tāmaki Makaurau Auckland


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Reflections of a mind’s mirage

In the depths of her fragmented mirror
scattered shards
run haphazardly like a messy storm

In the depths of her clockwork mind
phantasmagoria reigns
and time devours its own chains
Secrets sealed
tangled within her thoughts
dim glitter floats in the ether
filling her mind’s blank spaces

Like whimsy
whisper-stardust
patches up the memories
she makes

Her silence speaks for itself
her mind is
where feathers cover up the imperfections
where time is rewound
where

years can become days
and days,
can become hours
hours become minutes
and minutes,
become seconds

A sick fantasy, hollowed within her mind
to eat the truth
to detach her from the truth
to make her own truth

A world carved piece by piece
distorted
where lines blur between reality and dream

where time is accelerated
where seconds can become minutes
and minutes,
can become hours
hours become days

and days,

become years.


Sabrina Li, aged 14
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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Gradients

I can never tell when one colour ends and another starts
A phantasmagoria of rainbow
Spinning, spinning, spinning
Until I'm so dizzy and doubting

When polite ends and disrespectful starts
I am cartwheeling through double standards,
Forwards, forwards, forwards.
Time stretches on for all eternity and you zoom out and there's only really your boring everyday reality
For once,
For once,
Someone would understand I didn’t mean to

When friendly fire ends and hurt starts
Whispers are
Summoning demons but I'm in the centre
There’s no friendly fire
All fire burns, scalds, destroys
Flickering candles grow
Into roaring bonfires
When given the chance
They engulf me, enveloping me and sealing me in rising carbon dioxide, suffocating me in stereotypes
Chanting that my fate has already been written
Bottle sealed

When a happy friendship ends and a toxic one starts
Is she really wanting the best for me?
I eat your sorrows
Stuff them down, six feet under
Shoving aside my life for yours

Independence / Loneliness
Kindness / People-pleasing
But fun is chaos
Feathers on scales
Disconnected, syncopated when I keep upsetting the system
When ‘normal’ ends and ‘different’ starts But it all doesn’t matter when you’re crying. The world is blurred anyway.

Cicy Chen, aged 14
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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Snap Snap

Feather drops to the ground
Scuttling quietly goes mouse
Whisper, whisper to its young
Snap, snap goes the jaws of owl

A silent night with wings aflight
Soaring, swooping, a sense of fear
A shrill cry and lullaby to your prey
This night it’s time to eat

Feather drops to the ground
Scuttling quietly goes mouse
Whisper, whisper to its young
Snap, snap go the jaws of owl

A tranquil night with eyes alight
Flapping, flying, a sense of dread
A piercing cry and song to your prey
This night it’s time to eat

A calm night with a beak to bite
Gliding, diving, a sign of death
A deafening cry and melody to your prey
This night it’s time to eat

Feather drops to the ground
Scuttling quietly goes mouse
Whisper, whisper to its young
Snap, snap go the jaws of owl

Mouse sees a silhouette
A phantasmagoria
Wings through the trees

Too late

Snap snap go the owl’s jaws

Isabelle Holmes, aged 9
Ōtautahi Christchurch


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The Dream

She walks down the corridor
A mirror
A reflection of herself
What will they think of me
A wave
Horrible thoughts
Anxiety creates a phantasmagoria of fear

She arrives to a class
Awkward and scared
She speaks the wrong words
Laughter
Giggles
She fights back tears
Time slows down for embarrassment

Bells ring
No friends
She sits alone
Eats alone
Tears burn
Her eyes are sore
Loneliness consumes your happiness.

Months go by
Whispers get louder
Alone and scared
Crying suffocates
The blood stops pumping
Her soul fades away
Like a feather

Tallulah Kearney, aged 13
Tāmaki Makaurau Auckland


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Across The Pond

A feather
Floating
Gently
Across the pond

Tattered with age
And
Speaking of forgotten times
When memories were made
Across the pond

From the glossy plumage
Of a swan
Like a slice of moonlight
Wandering
Across the pond

A glint of
Shimmering scales
A rainbow fish
Leaping
Across the pond

A gentle ripple
As the fish dives
Underwater
Once more
Across the pond

An eerie whisper of wind
An imagination
Creating phantasmagorias
That dance
On the watery surface
Across the pond

A sliver of moonlight
Growing
Spreading
Eating up the space
As the clouds slip away
Across the pond

The moon
Shimmering
Reflected in
The eternal depths

Of the still water
All of this happened
Across the pond.

Rose Harris, aged 11
Kirikiriroa Hamilton


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中国新年 / Chinese New Year

Signs for dumplings, rice and noodles hang from nearby stalls.
All around me, people eat.
Some hold lanterns and flowers.
Mammoth sized cherry trees line the street.
Red pieces of paper hang from their branches, like phantasmagorias.
The cool air swirls around me, making whooshing sounds, whispering in my ears.
Children run, waving red lanterns dangling from sticks.
Girls in beautiful dresses swirl, posing for pictures taken by overly energetic parents.
A beautiful, grey-white dove feather softly lands on my head.
A warm, orange glows from red coloured lanterns.
Makes everything happy and snug.
I wish that time would stop.
That I could stay here forever.
Giant crowds of people strain their heads
to catch glimpses of the golden red dragon
dancing with men and women.
I begin to dance, slowly at first,
my feet stepping to the beats of the gongs.
Everything is joyful, everything…

Emma Jia Xin Zhang, aged 11
Ōtautahi Christchurch



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Sky Stories

Stars shaped to Hercules.
Stars shaped to memories.
Pieces of platinum tossed to night.
Sky’s unshed tears.
Collected and
too hard to let fall.
Reflecting pool of stories.
Whispering, gently as feathers
If only you listen.
Always late to see.
Time eating them to phantasmagoria
Sentinel over dreams.

Rebecca Fraser, aged 11
Ōtautahi Christchurch



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Continue reading the winning poems along with the judge's comments here and the poems from the Adult's category here.